This chapter, as good as, if not better than the first ... your keeping us waiting in anticipation, arn\'t you? Ahh well, the wait will be worth it I guess .... ~ Hayley
Great first chapter ... loved it! I\'ve said it many, many times but this is a really good fic and you cant give up on it, lol, I wont let you! ~ Hayley
I am not a huge fan of time travel but this looks interesting I cant wait for an update
This is good. I hope you will add more soon.
I absolutely love this fic! Please, oh please, update soon!
Hmmm... intriguing, very intriguing. Wow, how can one chapter leave so much unsaid? Hey... wait a minute... you\'re one of those terrible teases, aren\'t ya? You know, the kind that leave evil little cliffies. The kind of cliffies that have all the readers gnashing their teeth in frustration and recheckin\' every five minutes to see if you\'ve updated. Yeah, that\'s what you are all right! I\'ve gotcha cornered now! The only thing to be done in these cases is to suffer through your cruelty until you\'re ready to give us more great updates. Would a queitly uttered \"please\" help speed things along? Or maybe a shouted \"PRETTY PLEASE WITH SEVERUS ON TOP!\" work even better? Anyhoo, updates SOON, please! Happy writing, silly chit. Tengo que irme! Salud! Your new annoying fan, Killer K ;p
Lovely start, I look forward to more. Thank you for writing
That\'s a really interesting concept you came up with, I have to admit I am very intrigued. You should definetely keep writing it. However, just a little advice, you should probably seek out a beta to help you edit it. There were many spelling errors and the dialogue could use some touching up. Also, Severus would never insult Dumbledore and for him to do so is too OOC. I\'m not saying these things to discourage you, I love your story idea and I definetely think it has a lot of potential, so please keep writing. I\'ll be waiting to read the update! ;-) ~GiddyGirl
Hmm....I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Update soon please!