It isn\'t often that I review because I am lazy as I can be, but I had to do it for you. Most of the time I enjoy more plot in a story, but with your talent the plot doesn\'t have to be complex. I am amazed at how hot and heavy your work is. To say I enjoyed this story is like saying the Sahara is hot. MAGNIFICENT work Ms_Figg, just wonderful! I admire you greatly. You know how to draw the passion out and dance around a little sexual tension like a pro. I found absolutely nothing lacking in your work. And, I am working my way through the rest of your fiction like a kid in a candy store. I\'ve never seen anyone\'s work to compare to yours, really. Please don\'t ever stop writing, please!
That was AMAZING, but where\'s part two? *blink*
I just wanted to say that I love all your stories. I have read almost all of them and how you make H/S (or should it be S/h) become alive to me when I read. That is a wonderful talent and you should be proud of your self. I was wondering if you are going to be posting all of your stories on Whispers since AdultFanFiction.Net has gone away. I was on chapter 36 or so of one of your other stories and would love to finish it but for the life of me I cant remember the title....:( Like I said I think you are very talented and just wanted to tell you so. Amber
Ms Figg, I do hope the review from Cupcake does not discourage you from posting here. This is a wonderful sight and I do enjoy posting my stories here. There are several faithful readers who do appreciate your stories. The first story is always the toughest, as I am quite critical with my own, but please allow me to reassure you, your first story is wonderful and I really did enjoy it. Hugs! Corazon
Well, this is probably my least favorite story I\'ve read from you. Since it was your first, I guess maybe that\'s the reason. I\'ve read a lot of your stories. (So clearly, you do capture my attention. That and I\'m a pervert, clearly.) I hated the ending. There were times where each of the characters spent WAY too many paragraphs musing over one another. And I while I know that this is clearly fan fiction and not AT ALL canon, I can\'t help but see Hermione and Severus as OC\'s very lightly based on two character\'s JKR created. But I have to say, you come up with the most horribly wonderful metaphors. I mean... wow. The imagery is nice but the wording... Just read it outloud one time. You\'ll know what I mean. Anyway, this is a weird review, I\'m sure. It\'s both good and bad though, I think. I say don\'t stop writing, and I\'m sure you won\'t.