I absolutly adore these characters! I love how Severus reacts in the end when Hermone goes away...great job. Can\'t wait to read your next work with these characters1
A very lovely and humorous one shot!
Love the CROK gang! So many favorite bits and pieces, but my favorite threat from Severus is \"I will lock you two up in a cage hanging from Sybil Trelawney\'s classroom for three months.\" Shiver! That WOULD be an awful punishment!
First, I love the way you had them grow up. Very nice and realistic. Second, the Galaxy Quest quotation was hilarious....I just watched it the other night, and I still got a laugh out of it. Keep up the writing....